This starts well but then you haven't really completed the analysis with little analysis of editing, mise en scene or representation of the artist. You haven't identified the elements that inspire you and help with your own ideas. You need to improve this and do two more case studies. Vanessa
In the first case study I was able to add in an analysis of the artists representation and manage to add to the analysis of editing. I have continued to do this through my other two case studies
This is much better now Katerine. The 3rd case study isn't so detailed on technical elements and you could still be clearer on specific elements you can use in your own video- this is still a bit vague. V
This starts well but then you haven't really completed the analysis with little analysis of editing, mise en scene or representation of the artist. You haven't identified the elements that inspire you and help with your own ideas. You need to improve this and do two more case studies. Vanessa
ReplyDeleteIn the first case study I was able to add in an analysis of the artists representation and manage to add to the analysis of editing.
ReplyDeleteI have continued to do this through my other two case studies
This is much better now Katerine. The 3rd case study isn't so detailed on technical elements and you could still be clearer on specific elements you can use in your own video- this is still a bit vague. V
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